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Great story! 5/5 stars for you :-D
Thank you so much! :D Glad you liked it :)
I like this story too! You made it perfect with the single parts, everyone a story in itself. Still, I am sad for Beth... 5/5
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it - I myself am sad for Beth too, but I wanted to give this story a realistic outcome, and no Happy End as, you know, life doesn't give you Happy Endings all the time. ;)
You were night to give this story a sad end - as life often happens... You describe very good how much we sometimes are ready to do to be loved...
Thank you very much! Yeah, love is this twisted thing, and I wanted to show that it's not always going according to plan or hopes.
Great story! As Zora said, the length of the single parts is perfect. I love how you "framed" the story with first an tge last part even though it made me sad how the story ended for Beth. Next to this I really enjoyed your style of writing :)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the story and everything! :D
Wow! What an amazing short story! First I thought, it's going to be a longer, but now I think, it has the perfect length. Every word is well placed, I loved the repeating of "Just". 5/5, of course.
Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear that you liked it :D